Lily And Lou
A children's poem about two corgis.17 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
the picture was adorable because my daughter raises Corgi pups. But the poem was pure magic for the children and will bring smiles to their faces as they also learn the lesson. Well done.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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the picture was adorable because my daughter raises Corgi pups. But the poem was pure magic for the children and will bring smiles to their faces as they also learn the lesson. Well done.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from gramalot8
There are so many moments in a child's life that fills them with fear. Your storyline in the poem could definitely be a message for kids to help them overcome yheir own fears, as Lily had to overcome hers.
Thanks for sharing this with us.Good luck with the prompt contest.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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There are so many moments in a child's life that fills them with fear. Your storyline in the poem could definitely be a message for kids to help them overcome yheir own fears, as Lily had to overcome hers.
Thanks for sharing this with us.Good luck with the prompt contest.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from bob cullen
Such a lovely image, but the poem was better. It flowed so beautifully and it passed the ultimate test. I read it too my granddaughter and her face lit up with the most beautiful smile. To me, that is so much better than my opinion, though I too loved it.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Such a lovely image, but the poem was better. It flowed so beautifully and it passed the ultimate test. I read it too my granddaughter and her face lit up with the most beautiful smile. To me, that is so much better than my opinion, though I too loved it.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Oh, thank you! I'm so pleased that your granddaughter enjoyed it too!
Comment from Wendy G
This is a lovely one for children, with the fun of fantasy and magic to remove fears. It speaks of play, happiness and friendship. Delightful. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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This is a lovely one for children, with the fun of fantasy and magic to remove fears. It speaks of play, happiness and friendship. Delightful. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Mike Stevens
An excellent children's poem, Hull------good luck in the contest. Kids will love it, as it brings whimsical and magical together in one great story, Hull
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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An excellent children's poem, Hull------good luck in the contest. Kids will love it, as it brings whimsical and magical together in one great story, Hull
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much.
Comment from ~Dovey
Hello Poet!
Thank you for sharing this rhyming adventure of Lily and Lou. My poodle is named Lily, too!
Children will love it!
Good luck in the contest.
Kim
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Hello Poet!
Thank you for sharing this rhyming adventure of Lily and Lou. My poodle is named Lily, too!
Children will love it!
Good luck in the contest.
Kim
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much for the read and review!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This is a charming entry for the Children's Rhyming Poem writing prompt. The picture is wonderful. it looks like you have a real talent for writing AND illustrating for children. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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This is a charming entry for the Children's Rhyming Poem writing prompt. The picture is wonderful. it looks like you have a real talent for writing AND illustrating for children. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This is a nice poem for kids. Getting lost is a big fear for little kids. You wrote this well. The picture is very cute. And your colors draw attention. Have a good week. Karen
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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This is a nice poem for kids. Getting lost is a big fear for little kids. You wrote this well. The picture is very cute. And your colors draw attention. Have a good week. Karen
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you.
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Comment from teafor2
Unknown wordsmith, what a delightful story in this teachable write...Friendship overrides fear or loyalty wins out...Both sentiments are
note worthy, valuable moral indicators and not age limited. Adorable picture compliments these smooth flowing rhyming stanzas. Good in the
contest. teafor2
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Unknown wordsmith, what a delightful story in this teachable write...Friendship overrides fear or loyalty wins out...Both sentiments are
note worthy, valuable moral indicators and not age limited. Adorable picture compliments these smooth flowing rhyming stanzas. Good in the
contest. teafor2
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much.
Comment from GoWiSt
I think corgis are cute dogs.
Cheerful narrative tale in this poem.
Good playful fantastical imagery.
"'Where are you hiding,' Perhaps, a question mark is needed here.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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I think corgis are cute dogs.
Cheerful narrative tale in this poem.
Good playful fantastical imagery.
"'Where are you hiding,' Perhaps, a question mark is needed here.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thanks.