Aiona's Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 145 "Winter Hardy"Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You must like broccoli as I don't think I have ever read a poem to include this vegetable before, a fun 5-7-5 for the contest and I wish you luck, love Dolly x x w
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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You must like broccoli as I don't think I have ever read a poem to include this vegetable before, a fun 5-7-5 for the contest and I wish you luck, love Dolly x x w
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Thanks for your review, Dolly! It flowered recently! I hope I get more seeds......
Comment from hullabaloo22
This is excellent! In those three lines you managed to convey a harshness of winter, and a surprising resilience of... Broccoli.
Great illustration for the poem too.
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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This is excellent! In those three lines you managed to convey a harshness of winter, and a surprising resilience of... Broccoli.
Great illustration for the poem too.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Thanks for your review, hullaballo22.