Comment from Kelly Louisa Balliu

Excellent

Indeed. Time can seem unlimited when it comes to grieving. Nicely written and you used a beautiful and unusual image to accompany your poem. I hope you have been able to find the right tools and support to be able to get through such a difficult time.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024

Thanks.

Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

Another fine poem Hull....and one that says it all in five words....good luck in the contest. Cuts right to the truth of the matter. How grid can seem all there is

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024

Thank you!

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

This was really a strong piece since you only had six syllables to work with. The artwork is visually powerful as well. Nice entry. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024

Thank you.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I am sorry you have had so much personal loss as of late. Your poem reflects the sadness you must feel. You got the syllable count right, and I think the picture made a good addition to the poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024

Thank you so much for reading.