The Raindrop Burns
lost love3 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao ! you now have 11 votes.
I found your poem very melancholy. She waited all her life, hoping he would come around and realise how much she loved him.
He should have told her straight out he was not in love and that he only saw her as a dear friend.
The flow was smooth and I liked the sad vibe.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Ciao ! you now have 11 votes.
I found your poem very melancholy. She waited all her life, hoping he would come around and realise how much she loved him.
He should have told her straight out he was not in love and that he only saw her as a dear friend.
The flow was smooth and I liked the sad vibe.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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thanks tempeste
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Your are welcome!🙂
Comment from Sally Law
Wendy,
Ouch! I felt the loss in this one! A lot of "Nevers" in this one and unfulfilled dreams. I ache thinking of her as I near seventy and have so much love!
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming vote.
Sal xoxo
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Wendy,
Ouch! I felt the loss in this one! A lot of "Nevers" in this one and unfulfilled dreams. I ache thinking of her as I near seventy and have so much love!
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming vote.
Sal xoxo
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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thanks Sally
Comment from Dr. Nad
This is an excellent entry for "The raindrop burns" writing prompt contest. I like how you carefully constructed the joy, the jerk, and the junk of a geriatric woman's lifetime all in such an economy of words. You enable your readers to experience empathy for this grandmotherly woman who missed out, hon, many of the joys of life. Thanks
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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This is an excellent entry for "The raindrop burns" writing prompt contest. I like how you carefully constructed the joy, the jerk, and the junk of a geriatric woman's lifetime all in such an economy of words. You enable your readers to experience empathy for this grandmotherly woman who missed out, hon, many of the joys of life. Thanks
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thanks Dr Nad
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You are most welcome!