Reflection of beauty
Two meaning 5-7-53 total reviews
Comment from Mark Jackson
I thank you for your amendments and for being so understanding.
Hello, I am the creator of this competition. I am contacting you in the interest of fairness. Your entry to the competition does not currently meet the brief. The idea was to write a poem that fit the title. Then when reread it also fit the picture and this was the twist. Is should be a surprise to the reader. I am afraid by directly naming the animal in the poem you are breaking the rules. You still have a chance to change this. I apologise that I was not clear enough in the guidelines it is my first competition.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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I thank you for your amendments and for being so understanding.
Hello, I am the creator of this competition. I am contacting you in the interest of fairness. Your entry to the competition does not currently meet the brief. The idea was to write a poem that fit the title. Then when reread it also fit the picture and this was the twist. Is should be a surprise to the reader. I am afraid by directly naming the animal in the poem you are breaking the rules. You still have a chance to change this. I apologise that I was not clear enough in the guidelines it is my first competition.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you dear Mark for the constructive critistism! And delightful review! Is It Ok now?
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I have jist taken a look and realised that your title swan lake refers to the picture. for a Double mean this will have yo be changed. To something about beauty perhaps?
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How about now?
Sincerely, rebekka
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That is a Beautiful title.
Comment from kahpot
This is beautifully presented, and your words capture this scene as the beautiful swan's form hearts of love, even the reflection is wonderful, very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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This is beautifully presented, and your words capture this scene as the beautiful swan's form hearts of love, even the reflection is wonderful, very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you dear kahpot <3
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Hmmm. I think this doesn't quite conform with the guidelines, so I thought I'd speak up so you don't get DQ'ed. It calls for a picture of an animal - so that part is right - but then, the title is supposed to be something completely unrelated to the picture (that part is right, too) while the poem itself can relate to either the title or the picture. That's where I think it doesn't quite fit the 'monogamy' part.
It's a lovely poem, though, by itself, and that font is perfect for it.
I hope I haven't overstepped my bounds here or made you think, "Who does she think she is?!" I'm just going with the idea that, if the situation were reversed, I'd want you to tell me. xo
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Hmmm. I think this doesn't quite conform with the guidelines, so I thought I'd speak up so you don't get DQ'ed. It calls for a picture of an animal - so that part is right - but then, the title is supposed to be something completely unrelated to the picture (that part is right, too) while the poem itself can relate to either the title or the picture. That's where I think it doesn't quite fit the 'monogamy' part.
It's a lovely poem, though, by itself, and that font is perfect for it.
I hope I haven't overstepped my bounds here or made you think, "Who does she think she is?!" I'm just going with the idea that, if the situation were reversed, I'd want you to tell me. xo
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you dear rachelle,<3
