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A NaPoWriMo Book of Poetry

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a sweet and endearing post and I adored the rhymes and sentiments here, the start of life can have its ups and downs but babies are resilient and bring us so much joy when they smile back at us with thanks, a fine post, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much, Dolly!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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Nicely worded poem. Absolutely beautiful baby! What a blessing to have her healthy and at home. I envision lots more poems about her in the future as she is the perfect subject. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
    I think this month of NaPoWriMo will be full of Evelyn Grace poems :) thank you, Marilyn.

    Kim
Comment from jessizero
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I enjoyed your poem. It was adorable, and it was sweet that you call the baby "Turtle." I'm glad she is growing, and the picture was great. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Jessi!
Comment from Sallyo
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Here's another difficult and inventing form, beautifully complemented by the photo. Both poem and photo fit the theme of the book. It's an interesting theme, too, capable of a lot of different interpretations.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Sally! I love trying out or inventing new styles of poetry.

    Kim
Comment from lyenochka
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Welcome to the world, precious Evelyn Grace! WOW, five days to arrive - that's a record! Poor mom!
Thanks for sharing what a Bob and Wheel poem is and I like how you made it a haibun.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
    Thank you! It was quite a long labor. Theresa stayed with Nichole at the hospital and we kept the other 3 grands all that time. I just discovered the Bob and Wheel, too.

    Kim