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2024 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from shelley kaye
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hmm... i'm not sure about drips and drops...

after the rain
water beads upon tree branches--
moon drops

or it could be just me LOL
good haiku with nice imagery
thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Shelley. That does look better.

    gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Yes, the moonlight glistening off of drips of rain is almost magical. Thank you for leaving that image in my mind. It will stick with me all day. I appreciate that.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
    Thank you very much, Barbara

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Comment from RJ Heritage
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The Gaiku is one of my favorites styles. You present them beautifully.Thus obe is no exception. Nice striking colors that do not overstate the intention.
Well done.
RJ

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
    Thank you very much, RJ

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Comment from GWHARGIS
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Another moody haiku. I love how I could see this. The term moon drops fascinates me. It could be two different things. The actual moon dropping lower in the sky, or it could be the reflection of the moon in the tiny droplets clinging to the leaves. This was beautiful. Gretchen

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
    Thank you very much, Gretchen

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Comment from kahpot
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The glistening raindrops from the moonlight are a magical sight, your chosen artwork is wonderful, kind of eerie yet inviting, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
    Thank you very much, kym

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Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
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Oh Wow, this is gorgeous! And the perfect poem, backdrop and art for this wonderful haiku. And I love that you are always use less where the rest of us scramble for every syllable we can use. And yet you do such a splendid job with this. Awesome, Marival. Just beautiful! Love, Debi

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
    Thank you very much, Debi.

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Comment from lyenochka
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Cool pictures. Just like the round full moon those drops shine as they cling to the tree branches. Or perhaps the rain lasted into the night and the moonlight shines on the raindrops. Lovely picture of a teasel (?) in the bottom picture.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
    yes, the bottom picture is a teasel, i love the way it looks and it's the right shade of blue.

    thank you very much, big sister, you always understand what my poems mean. I appreciate it.

    love,
    marival