What my body hides
A scars tale2 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
I couldn't find your internal rhyme, but that doesn't mean it isn't there. I'm sorry if I'm wrong. I did like your poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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I couldn't find your internal rhyme, but that doesn't mean it isn't there. I'm sorry if I'm wrong. I did like your poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This two line poem feels dark, sad, painful and personal. A lot of emotions expressed in just two lines. Very nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
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This two line poem feels dark, sad, painful and personal. A lot of emotions expressed in just two lines. Very nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024