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A poem from a hurt soul praying to visit heaven

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Comment from jessizero
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Congratulations on your first milestone post! Your poem was wonderful and tragic. I like that you included the handwritten version, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the nonfiction writing contest and a good first post. Welcome to Fanstory. It's nice to see another dark writer join the community. I'm not sure I can say I enjoyed this piece but I don't think it was meant to be enjoyed. What I can say is that I felt it deeply and it made me emotional. Nice writing. Good luck.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2024