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Nature's Romance

It Came From Beneath The Swamp!

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Comment from RichardsonKimberlee
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I love how your story rhymes and tell a full story altogether. You completely understood the assignment well. The poem is written well although it is short, each line is on point. The story is has a little humor in it I loved it and a happy ending. Nice job

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
    Please forgive the delay. I fell so far behind. Thanks for kind words. Just give me a yell if you feel I have ignored you. I would never do that!
Comment from Esther Brown
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Do you remember the silly ditty "Froggy went a courting..."
I need to look up the words again. My dad used to sing silly songs from long before I was born. He also could quote the ancient mariner and other poetry. You created a precious memory with those few lines. Esther

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
    Please forgive the delay. I fell so far behind. Thanks for kind words. Just give me a yell if you feel I have ignored you. I would never do that!
reply by Esther Brown on 15-Apr-2024
    Nah. I have been too busy to feel ignored...and reading a book called "Unoffendable". I talked my brother Paul Brown into joining. He is under Paul Brown1 name. I gave him your name as I feel you are kindred spirits. He has been a missionary all his life and does paulsparables.com. He reads his stories on two Christian radio stations and needs a new outlet. Esther
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
    Thank you. I had an odd coincidence this morning, except I don't think there are coincidences in God's work. I left the breakfast room early and shared an elevator with the Activities Director. She said it was okay to have a service and she would contact Grace Bsaptist.
reply by Esther Brown on 16-Apr-2024
    Nope, no coincidences. God planned it. I will be gone for about 2 weeks in Florida, will try to get on the computer a bit but catch you when I return for sure.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
    I will surely miss hearing from you and reading your words. Have a wonderful, blessed time!
Comment from jessizero
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This was so funny, but i'm not sure why. I thought the poem was cute, and you got the syllable count right. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
    Please forgive the delay. I fell so far behind. Thanks for kind words. Just give me a yell if you feel I have ignored you. I would never do that!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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You made me smile with this union and what the two of them would produce! Ha ha ha, you made me smile here, good luck with the contest, this is inventive, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2024