Comment from
jessizero
I enjoyed your nature poem in 3-5-3 format. You got the subject matter and syllable count right, and you paint a lovely mental image of leaves "bursting." Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
Thank you very much, jessizero.
Comment from
rspoet
This is an excellent 3-5-3 poem for the nature contest
Trees are one of nature's joys, as well as essential in providing
shade and producing oxygen, home to birds and others.
Well done with very good art work to match.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
Thank you very much, Robert, for sharing and praising my short poem.