Autumn tree
3-5-3 poem2 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 3-5-3 poem on nature
and autumn's wonderful display of colors
I don't think you need the apostrophe in line one (fall maples is the plural)
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
  |
This is an excellent 3-5-3 poem on nature
and autumn's wonderful display of colors
I don't think you need the apostrophe in line one (fall maples is the plural)
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
-
Thank you dear Robert <3
Comment from RodG
A postcard image of golden apple leaves strewn by the wind in Fall. Nicely done in only eleven syllables. One suggestion for line 2: WIND-ABANDONED leaves. Rod
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
|
A postcard image of golden apple leaves strewn by the wind in Fall. Nicely done in only eleven syllables. One suggestion for line 2: WIND-ABANDONED leaves. Rod
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
-
Thank you dear Rod <3