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Fruits of the Spirit

redeeming past lives

4 total reviews 
Comment from tempeste
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Ciao ! You now have two votes.

Your banana poems spur me to know more.

The banana industry provides one million work and more importantly, it is a food that provides people with their basic mineral and vitamin intake.

Bananas, apples and grapes are the top 3 eaten fruits in the world.

This delicious food is one of my all time favourite after blood oranges .

What I found out this morning is a shocker .. the cavendish banana could be wiped out just like the Big Mike in the 60s.

Not having seeds is a big disadvantage.

I'll send you the link via PM, here it gets blocked.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
    Yes the cavendish will eventually need a replacement. Maybe we will come up with a better breed eventually that resists bruising like the Cavendish, but is more flavorful like the previous dominant breed. Thanks for the thoughtful comments!

    SS
reply by tempeste on 08-Apr-2024
    🙂
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi SS
I like the colorful words to go with the artwork. I like the metaphor too.
That faith and salvation and the use of the fruits of the spirit makes us wild sinners into holy ones worthy of Heaven
Congrats on placing second in the reviewing contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the day.
Joan

P. S. If you would like to, can you please give me your first name.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
    Thanks Joan -- I can't do that on a public board (this is also a blind contest) but message me privately!
reply by dragonpoet on 05-Apr-2024
    You're welcome.
    Joan
reply by dragonpoet on 05-Apr-2024
    Without having your name to click on I can't get to your message board. Try going to mine which is under the screen name dragonpoet
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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And you know something, those pesky plantains have just gotta go! So hooray to salvation! Although of course we all need our spiritual journey. So well done for incorporating so much into so little. Good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
    Thanks a bunch Debbie!
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reply by Debbie D'Arcy on 06-Apr-2024
    Nice one!
Comment from rspoet
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This is an excellent 3-5-3 poem for the contest on nature.
Hmmm, bananas, I wonder who might have written this one.
Excellent presentation with picture and description.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest and enjoy the bananas.
Robert


 Comment Written 03-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
    Hmm good question! Whoever would write such a thing!?
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