Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

cool mirrored haiku. . . and pics!
smooth flow in both and through both
nice imagery of looking at the night sky

thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 03-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I don't like to think about the human shell decomposing in the ground. I feel that when you die, it's like a butterfly emerging from a cocoon. We are free. This was a beautifully written poem. Gretchen

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024

I believe that too.

Thank you very much, Gretchen

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Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

Very stunning Reflection Haiku. I am certainly learning a lot about this style from you. The words are beautiful and the colors are radiant. Is this subject about Jesus Christ? Thanks for sharing.
RJ

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024

I didn't write it thinking of Jesus but it can be... I see why you would think that with Easter Sunday... so it's open for interpretation. Other reviewers thought so too.

Thank you very much, RJ

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Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I'm pretty sure you're discussing Jesus not being in the grave, but you also give the eerie feeling of a mysterious empty grave. I prefer to think of Jesus' empty grave because he rose. I enjoyed this entire presentation.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024

Thank you very much, Barbara,

love,
marival

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Such a cool Reflection Haiku! Love the Easter message and Eastertide continues until Pentecost so there's never too much repetition of this great message that He is Risen and He's not in the grave!

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024

Thank you very much, big sister (*-*)