Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very lovely and true Faith 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest. The Lord is right here with us all the time. He never leaves us, nor forsakes us. Great and true words and nice artwork that goes so well with your poem. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024

Thanks for the read and feedback. Appreciated.

Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

It's so nice of that Ward Clever-type guy to give Jesus a compassionate voice to trust! Jesus looks very serene and appreciative, indeed!! In fact, I can see his heart blinking with it right through his nightgown there!!

Very nice 5-7-5; I hope it does well for you in the contest, Mystery Writer!!

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024

Thanks for the read and feedback.

reply by Rachelle Allen on 03-Apr-2024

Haha. You're welcome. I hope I didn't cross any borders with my "humor." I just did that 'put a different slant on it' writer's thing and hoped you were in a jovial mood. No offense intended, I hope you know.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Trusting in our faith and enjoying the support when we believe is indeed a fine way to live and I enjoyed your fine 5-7-5 for the contest and wish you luck, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024

Thanks for your read and feedback.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

So very true, He is always there, and we can always count on Him with His help and forgiveness, so much said here in so few words, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024

Thanks for your read, feedback and good wishes.