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Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....and hang on to such a man, they're in short supply....far more prevalent is the man who wants sex one demand then dinner, now!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....and hang on to such a man, they're in short supply....far more prevalent is the man who wants sex one demand then dinner, now!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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lol thank you, mike (*=*)
gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
No matter what we do, God will never leave us behind. He loves us unconditionally. It's our job to allow Him to do that. He will never give us on us, even though we give us on ourselves. Loved the presentation.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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No matter what we do, God will never leave us behind. He loves us unconditionally. It's our job to allow Him to do that. He will never give us on us, even though we give us on ourselves. Loved the presentation.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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Yes, I agree (*÷*)
Thank you very much the excellent review and kind words, Barbara.
Love,
Marival
Comment from RJ Heritage
I liked this Yamato. I have read some of them before and this is as good as any I have seen. A friend from Japan sent me a few, and you seem to have captured it's spirit here.
RJ
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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I liked this Yamato. I have read some of them before and this is as good as any I have seen. A friend from Japan sent me a few, and you seem to have captured it's spirit here.
RJ
Comment Written 01-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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Yes, I agree (*÷*)
Thank you very much the excellent review and kind words, .
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
love the second verse about not leaving you behind...
a great free verse with smooth flow and nice images
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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love the second verse about not leaving you behind...
a great free verse with smooth flow and nice images
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 01-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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Yes, I agree (*÷*)
Thank you very much the excellent review and kind words, .
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
That sounds like the perfect person to have in your corner. The one who knows your flaws, embraces you at your weakest moments. You swear to love them no matter what. Beautifully written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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That sounds like the perfect person to have in your corner. The one who knows your flaws, embraces you at your weakest moments. You swear to love them no matter what. Beautifully written. Gretchen
Comment Written 01-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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Yes, I agree (*÷*)
Thank you very much the excellent review and kind words, .
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
You always depict longing so well. And I think the best kind of longing is that of being with the Lord someday beyond the trials of this world and being fully at peace and joy with Him someday.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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You always depict longing so well. And I think the best kind of longing is that of being with the Lord someday beyond the trials of this world and being fully at peace and joy with Him someday.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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Yes, I agree (*÷*)
Thank you very much the excellent review, big sister. You are the only one that understands it's about Jesus. You are such a talented reviewer.
Love
Marival
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💖💖 I think we just understand each other!