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Comment from Sallyo
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Sometimes the feeling that someone's got your back makes all the difference and your 5-7-5 gets that point over persuasively. It's an interesting form, with the self rhyme for all three lines.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
    Hope helps. Thank you for sharing your ideas about this poem.
Comment from jessizero
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I like this poem a great deal. It stresses the importance of hope and faith, and you got the syllable count right for the contest. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024
    Thank you. I think you hit the nail on its head. Even when we feel disappointed or hurt, indeed, especially then, hope and faith are vital. All the best. And thank you for sharing.