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Slave to call

Lanturne poem

4 total reviews 
Comment from BermyBye50
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rjuselius,

Welcome to Fanstory and congrats on winning the Lanturne poetry contest. Looking forward to reading and reviewing more of your writes in the future.

All the best,

Eugene

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
    Thank you dear eugene <3
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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This is a well-crafted lanturne verse, flowing with excellent alliteration and evoking a scene of drama, danger and dread. Very well done and a great contender:) Good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
    Thank you dear Debbie <3
Comment from jessizero
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This poem was great, in my opinion. You got the format and syllable count right, and I loved your alliteration. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024
    Thank you dear jessi <3
Comment from Bill Schott
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This lanturne poem, Hurt, has the proper formatting and depicts with this dying set of roses the painful remainder of a friendship or greater relationship left to expire.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024
    Thank you dear Bill <3