Comment from karenina

Excellent

These 5-7-5 challenges draw a lot of attention and competition. I see you can hold your own with the best of them! You've mastered the images and this one "pops" with the words you've expressed.

One more time with the editor in your above the title line:

"Forever �¢?�¦my love"

Aaaargh!

If you only knew how many years we've all been dealing with this!

Karenina

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024

Darn Evil Eddie! Yeah, 5-7-5 poems are fun and easy!

reply by karenina on 09-Jul-2024

Evil Eddie is always lurking!

Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

Very romantic and sexy and appealing. You definitely answered the call of this contest prompt with aplomb and panache. I hope you find yourself in the Winner's Circle, Mystery Contestant. Good luck. xo

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024

Thank you so much for the review and the good luck wishes for the contest!

reply by Rachelle Allen on 02-Apr-2024

You're welcome!! xo

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

You don't need the apostrophe in "let's" (It should be "lets"). Other than that, this was a great poem with the correct syllable count. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024

Thanks for the review and the correction! I changed it.