Anticipation
The feeling of buying a home for the first time.8 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Cosmic,
You did a good job with this tyburn about buying your first home. It feels like you are signing your old life away for a new one. Your words to evoke the feelings felt in that moment.
Joan
P.S. I would like you to know that I have just published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com and there is a link to it at the bottom of my profile page.
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Hi Cosmic,
You did a good job with this tyburn about buying your first home. It feels like you are signing your old life away for a new one. Your words to evoke the feelings felt in that moment.
Joan
P.S. I would like you to know that I have just published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com and there is a link to it at the bottom of my profile page.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, you now have three votes!
Yes buying a house is a dream many people hope to realise. But it's getting harder and harder to buy one.
In my country many inherit their parents' house in time.
But everything is changing .. houses have lost much of their value due to the new eco green laws the EU has imposed.
Europe is an old continent and most ( stone) houses can not be easily made green.
Also now everything costs three times as much building material etc.
And so the value of our houses have nosedived.
Our leaders have taken away our last ( and most precious) valued resource : our house.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Ciao mystery poet, you now have three votes!
Yes buying a house is a dream many people hope to realise. But it's getting harder and harder to buy one.
In my country many inherit their parents' house in time.
But everything is changing .. houses have lost much of their value due to the new eco green laws the EU has imposed.
Europe is an old continent and most ( stone) houses can not be easily made green.
Also now everything costs three times as much building material etc.
And so the value of our houses have nosedived.
Our leaders have taken away our last ( and most precious) valued resource : our house.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your feedback.
Comment from Mark Jackson
Ooh that is good, I really like the whole presentation of this one, the picture is well chosen and the gold on black works well. The words sum up the excrement of first time buying. Good Luck.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Ooh that is good, I really like the whole presentation of this one, the picture is well chosen and the gold on black works well. The words sum up the excrement of first time buying. Good Luck.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thank you, I had fun writing it.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have bought many homes and my most recent purchase filled me with great excitement and furnishing my home was a pleasure, I enjoyed your uplifting post about buying your first home, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024
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I have bought many homes and my most recent purchase filled me with great excitement and furnishing my home was a pleasure, I enjoyed your uplifting post about buying your first home, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for your feedback.
Comment from LJbutterfly
I looked closely and discovered your Tyburn poem meets every descriptive requirement. Your subject matter accurately describes the feeling of a first time home purchase, and your picture pairs perfectly. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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I looked closely and discovered your Tyburn poem meets every descriptive requirement. Your subject matter accurately describes the feeling of a first time home purchase, and your picture pairs perfectly. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the review, it is well received!
Comment from royowen
It's been a long time since I've written a tyburn poem, but your subject matter I can understand completely, although we've in our home for a long time, since .1977, beautifully written my friend, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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It's been a long time since I've written a tyburn poem, but your subject matter I can understand completely, although we've in our home for a long time, since .1977, beautifully written my friend, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Thank you, I had a little help from my nephew who's a realtor. He was very helpful. I enjoyed collaborating with him.
Comment from RodG
The house next door to me just sold to a young family buying their first home. Your Tyburn describes that incredible excitement very well. Good luck in the contest. Rod
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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The house next door to me just sold to a young family buying their first home. Your Tyburn describes that incredible excitement very well. Good luck in the contest. Rod
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Wow! Thank you for sharing the connection you made with your neighbor!
Comment from Julie Helms
This is a really interesting poetry format. You picked a perfect combination of words to get across the feeling of buying that home. It is a scary thing to make such a huge commitment, and you want it to be just right since you'll be stuck living there! You did a really good job telling this in such a brief format, that perfectly conveyed the experience. Julie.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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This is a really interesting poetry format. You picked a perfect combination of words to get across the feeling of buying that home. It is a scary thing to make such a huge commitment, and you want it to be just right since you'll be stuck living there! You did a really good job telling this in such a brief format, that perfectly conveyed the experience. Julie.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Thank you, I am glad you recognized the feeling of purchasing a home!