Changing Fate!
Classic duel.2 total reviews
Comment from Julie Helms
I loved that you picked a chocolate bunny for the duel. Eating the ears off is the funniest thing ever. Of course Jesus wins...he created the raw materials for the bunny! Cute poem. Julie :-)
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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I loved that you picked a chocolate bunny for the duel. Eating the ears off is the funniest thing ever. Of course Jesus wins...he created the raw materials for the bunny! Cute poem. Julie :-)
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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Thanks for feedback.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This reminds me of a video I happened to catch this morning with a pre-schooler discussing why she didn't understand "the Easter characters." She asked, "Did Jesus like chocolate or something?" and later mused, "And bunnies don't even LAY eggs!"
This poem of yours had that equal feeling of being rather torn by the symbolism vs. reality of it all.
Hope it does well for you in the contest! xo
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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This reminds me of a video I happened to catch this morning with a pre-schooler discussing why she didn't understand "the Easter characters." She asked, "Did Jesus like chocolate or something?" and later mused, "And bunnies don't even LAY eggs!"
This poem of yours had that equal feeling of being rather torn by the symbolism vs. reality of it all.
Hope it does well for you in the contest! xo
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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Thanks for feedback.