Eye Contact
That spark.3 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
That's always the best, isn't it? That "moment." The imagination goes wild, the heart quickens. You did a wonderful job of encapsulating all that here with just seventeen syllables, Mystery Contestant. I bet you'll find yourself in the Winner's Circle! Good luck. xo
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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That's always the best, isn't it? That "moment." The imagination goes wild, the heart quickens. You did a wonderful job of encapsulating all that here with just seventeen syllables, Mystery Contestant. I bet you'll find yourself in the Winner's Circle! Good luck. xo
Comment Written 01-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Hull....and isn't it strange how you're attracted to someone and the explanation as to why is inexplicable? Sometimes you're attracted even though you know it would be a disaster
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Another fine poem, Hull....and isn't it strange how you're attracted to someone and the explanation as to why is inexplicable? Sometimes you're attracted even though you know it would be a disaster
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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That's very true. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Comment from jessizero
This 5-7-5 poem really was romantic, more so than I thought could be expressed in so few syllables. I loved the way you wrote that last line. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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This 5-7-5 poem really was romantic, more so than I thought could be expressed in so few syllables. I loved the way you wrote that last line. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Thanks so much!