Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

I like this! It's sparky and lively and has a little tangy bite to it, but it's filled with warmth and loving sentiments. I love the artwork you chose to accentuate your lovely poem, as well. Good luck to you, Mystery Poet. I hope you do well at the polls!! xo

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024

Thank you. Your review means a lot. I appreciate your reading and commenting.

reply by Rachelle Allen on 01-Apr-2024

My pleasure!

reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024

Thank you as well for the good luck wish. I am going to need it.

reply by Rachelle Allen on 01-Apr-2024

These contests are never a barometer of whose piece was the best, but rather, like in an eighth grade student council vote, who has the most friends at the poll. Your poem is terrific regardless whether it wins or not. I mean that. xo

reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024

Thank you. I appreciate the encouragement.

reply by Rachelle Allen on 01-Apr-2024

If we're not doing that, we've missed the whole point of FanStory, I think! xo

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the romance contest
with very good imagery and a nice touch of alliteration.
You nailed the romance aspect very well.
Best wishes.
Robert

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024

Thank you. I wasn't quite sure if it was too over thought or not. I appreciate your review and comments.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I think you definitely accomplished writing a romantic 5-7-5. You got the syllable count right, and the content was lovely. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024

Thank you. I very much appreciate your reviewing it and your comments.