I Choose Rainbows
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Comment from Sallyo
I spent a few seconds pondering the syntax of Give to Lulu... might it be Gift to Lulu? But wouldn't that be Gift FOR Lulu? I concluded it's a piece of family speak. Lovely poem, highlighting a special relationship.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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I spent a few seconds pondering the syntax of Give to Lulu... might it be Gift to Lulu? But wouldn't that be Gift FOR Lulu? I concluded it's a piece of family speak. Lovely poem, highlighting a special relationship.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Grandkids are great. Do you have?
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I have two of them... 12 and 14. I rarely see them, alas, because they live in Queanbeyan and I'm in Tasmania
Comment from Julie G1
Aw, cute! This poem presents a love story in verse, with a family touch. Overall, this poem worked well for this reader. Well done, keep on writing, the reader anticipates more such verse.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Aw, cute! This poem presents a love story in verse, with a family touch. Overall, this poem worked well for this reader. Well done, keep on writing, the reader anticipates more such verse.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Thank you. I think I will.