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Seduced

he traded in his royal position for THIS?

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Comment from Topeking
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Very interesting poem based on a controversial topic!
Very solid opinion because I do wonder why he gave up his royalty to live an ordinary life. Well done on the 575 rhyming scheme!

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024
    Royalty isn't all it's cracked up to be, according to his book, I've heard. It does come with a lot of responsibility and scrutiny. Of course if he REALLY wanted to go in the opposite direction, he could have married someone other than a well-known actress! Thanks Topeking
reply by Topeking on 02-Apr-2024
    True,Interesting! I need to check that book out!
Comment from Julie Helms
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What a soap opera that whole mess is. Idk, royals are known for inbreeding which does eventually affect intelligence, leading to inappropriate plantain choices.
Ok, I'll be the bold one to ask the question EVERYONE is wondering but no one has the guts:
Is she missing a button or is that a nipple (of iron?) showing through a leather jacket??
Great thought-proving poem with an image that can't be unseen. You will have my vote.

:-)

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
    Good question. The book of catechisms on this subject states that plantains don't have nipples. They have birthmarks and bruises, and you won't know which it is until you peel them. The forehead thing is weird though. Plantainism is its own religion but there might be a Hindu sect within it.

    Thank you for you vote!
Comment from jessizero
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You got the syllable count correct, and you expressed the evil of plantains. All in all, I'd say this was a successful poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
    Thank you Jessi. That's right. I'm already working on my next warning to humanity about plantains.
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