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2024 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from EeanBlack
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That's my vacation spot. The poem is like a Vincent Van Gogh painting before his loss of sanity. Very good poem. You could be brilliant if you just lost YOUR mind. Speaking of losing your mind, why are there no more 6 stars?

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
    LoL I don't know why. I always run out of sixes.
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
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I could not imagine a more beautiful or safer place to rest my head, your words reinsure us that there is such a place and a way to achieve it, so very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
    Thank you, Kym, it's good to hear from you. I appreciate your kind feedback and exceptional six-stars review. May you have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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This poem is beautiful and peaceful. I could feel the serenity. I needed that at this very moment. Thank you for being inspired to know what I needed. I'm pretty sure others needed it too.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much for the excellent five stars review and kind words, I agree, we all need serenity :)

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from RJ Heritage
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These are beautiful verses and they are written on a lovely image. I love moonlit nights and also feel like if the universe is in serenade.
Well written.
RJ

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much for the excellent five stars review and kind words, RJ

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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dreamy and relaxing. . .
i like the thought of a valley full of love beneath a gold moon. . .
serene and peaceful. . .

thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much for the excellent five stars review and kind words, Shelley

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
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I loved the nighttime imagery here. It was calm, like nature's lullaby. The rolling hills, like a well worn mattress. The blue tint of the cool night. All that's missing is a cup of tea and a blanket. Beautiful haiku. Gretchen

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much for the excellent five stars review and kind words, Gretchen

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Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for 5-7-5 Poem contest. This poem seems like it could have been written with the attached artwork in mind. Both are perfect together. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much, Marilyn

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Comment from patcelaw
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Your wording is very nicely written, and your presentation is beautiful. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also wish for you a very happy Easter. God bless. Patricia

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much, Patricia. Happy Easter for you too.

    Gypsy hugs