Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

I get the emotion behind the poem, but it doesn't quite have the flow...but then, I am not a poet by any means so don't go by what I say.

I might have said:
Snow!
I don't want you. Please, go!
Yes!

Told you I wasn't a poet. LOL
Just have fun and keep writing.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024

The rules said ech line had to rhyme which did quite restrict the options - LOL. Thanks for reviewing!

reply by Begin Again on 30-Mar-2024

Oh that made it difficult too! Told you I needed to stay out of poetry! You are doing just fine without me. LOL

reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024

Thank you! I am finding Fanstory quite a challenge to navigate. Although I've been writing for years I have never been on a site that has points and currency. I'll get there eventually - LOL.

reply by Begin Again on 30-Mar-2024

If you have any questions, I'll be happy to try and help. Just send me a message.

Comment from Topeking

Good

Very good poem! Welldone on the 161 rhyming scheme! I really like the chosen image for this poem! Despite the beauty of snow, reality does set in when you are freezing and seeking warmth.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024

Thank you! I livepart way up a steep hill and snow can make traveling a real challenge.

Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

Another fine poemm, Hull----and I totally agree with your conclusion--in fact, if it never snow here in the lowlands that'd be fine with me. I'm the mountains it's a different story!

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024

Thank you!

Comment from RodG

Good

There are places in the upper Midwest that are inundated AGAIN with snow. I wish the COLD would vanish. May I address your attention to the contest's requirements? EVERY line must rhyme.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024

Thanks so much for pointing that out. I'll go and do a quick edit.