Smell of Orchids
A sight of wonder3 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written haiku poem about this very beautiful and very fragrant flower. You used great descriptive words and very beautiful imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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This is a very beautiful and well written haiku poem about this very beautiful and very fragrant flower. You used great descriptive words and very beautiful imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 29-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much! It's appreciated!
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you are so welcome!
Comment from jessizero
I like that you used the traditional/popular syllable count even though it wasn't required. Your subject was spot-on and the mental image of orchids was lovely. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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I like that you used the traditional/popular syllable count even though it wasn't required. Your subject was spot-on and the mental image of orchids was lovely. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello, Mystery Writer,
Thank you for sharing your haiku.
If I may, orchids exude a glorious fragrance as opposed to a "smell."
For your consideration:
"exuding a sweet fragrance"
Hoping I have not offended.
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Hello, Mystery Writer,
Thank you for sharing your haiku.
If I may, orchids exude a glorious fragrance as opposed to a "smell."
For your consideration:
"exuding a sweet fragrance"
Hoping I have not offended.
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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No I am not offended. In fact you gave me a great idea. The second line is changed. Thank you for your help and kind review!
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My pleasure.
Congratulations!
diane
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Thank you and you have helped me too! I'm glad to win first place!
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Smiles all around, Raul!
diane
