2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "My Love".
7 total reviews
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi MariVal,
so hand over the name and type of this silky delicious delight... and yes, no one will be hurt in the surrendering in the melting of my heart... ah, I mean chocolate. It is dark chocolate, right?
Perfect metaphor and innuendo.
And wasn't it a great movie to-boot!
All the very best in the contest... you tempted me chocolate seductress!
With our thoughts we create...
the smooth sensual taste on our palate.
Warmest regards,
James
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Hi MariVal,
so hand over the name and type of this silky delicious delight... and yes, no one will be hurt in the surrendering in the melting of my heart... ah, I mean chocolate. It is dark chocolate, right?
Perfect metaphor and innuendo.
And wasn't it a great movie to-boot!
All the very best in the contest... you tempted me chocolate seductress!
With our thoughts we create...
the smooth sensual taste on our palate.
Warmest regards,
James
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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"chocolate seductress!" Haha I love it, it's my new handle name. LoL
For me it has to be milk chocolate... with almonds is even better. I know dark chocolate is healthier but too bitter for me.
I love that anonymous quote... it's funny and true. I found it in a chocolate store in Sacramento, California.
Thank you for reading my silly poem.
Con cariņo, tu amiga Marival
Comment from barbara.wilkey
When one desires chocolate, one needs chocolate, and nothing had better get in the way of a lady and her chocolate. I do understand that need. LOL This poem caused me to smile and get a piece of rich dark chocolate.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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When one desires chocolate, one needs chocolate, and nothing had better get in the way of a lady and her chocolate. I do understand that need. LOL This poem caused me to smile and get a piece of rich dark chocolate.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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LoL I'm glad it made you smile, me too. It's so silly
Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind review.
Gypsy hugs
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LoL I'm glad it made you smile, me too. It's so silly
Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
ahh chocolate. . . always with you. . . a moment on your lips, sweetness melting on your tongue, and forever on your body LOL!
great tempting entry!
i'm sure it will tempt many to vote...
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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ahh chocolate. . . always with you. . . a moment on your lips, sweetness melting on your tongue, and forever on your body LOL!
great tempting entry!
i'm sure it will tempt many to vote...
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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I didn't know that saying lol
Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind review.
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I didn't know that saying lol
Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from RJ Heritage
Very sweet and tempting. Who doesn't like chocolate!? Only those who can't have it. Deep and rich colors that play into the sensuality of the moment, just like temptation does. Well written and expressed through all the senses.
RJ
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Very sweet and tempting. Who doesn't like chocolate!? Only those who can't have it. Deep and rich colors that play into the sensuality of the moment, just like temptation does. Well written and expressed through all the senses.
RJ
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind review.
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind review.
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You?re welcome
Comment from GWHARGIS
This had a very fun undertone to it. I never saw the movie but might have to check it out. I do love a good French accent. Lol. But there was also a serious note. When someone says the word forbidden, there is always a certain Parkside to things. Even chocolate. Great poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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This had a very fun undertone to it. I never saw the movie but might have to check it out. I do love a good French accent. Lol. But there was also a serious note. When someone says the word forbidden, there is always a certain Parkside to things. Even chocolate. Great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind review.
Gypsy hugs
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Ah, yes, that Chocolate is simply irresistible. I like how you have personified it and made it sound like a lady to her lover. But she's addressing "chocolate" ! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Ah, yes, that Chocolate is simply irresistible. I like how you have personified it and made it sound like a lady to her lover. But she's addressing "chocolate" ! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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I'm glad you got it, not everyone did.
Thank you very much, big sister.
Love
Marival
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I'm glad you got it, not everyone did.
Thank you very much, big sister.
Love
Marival
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Of course! I find chocolate hard to resist, too!
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
I mean honestly if you watch the commercials on tv, they make chocolate look like sex! This is perfect Gypsy, especially when you expect a different ending! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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I mean honestly if you watch the commercials on tv, they make chocolate look like sex! This is perfect Gypsy, especially when you expect a different ending! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind review.
Gypsy hugs
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind review.
Gypsy hugs