Fleeting
I'm hard to know2 total reviews
Comment from lancellot
This is very interesting poem. One where the subject looks in on themselves and sees the pain they have and the pain they bring to others. It also shows a person unwilling to heal or attempt change. A rare poem indeed.
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This is very interesting poem. One where the subject looks in on themselves and sees the pain they have and the pain they bring to others. It also shows a person unwilling to heal or attempt change. A rare poem indeed.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2024
Comment from jessizero
This poem was intense. I liked your descriptions, and I loved your rhymes. That last line was visceral. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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This poem was intense. I liked your descriptions, and I loved your rhymes. That last line was visceral. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2024