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Mother Nature's Shoe Store

A perfect fit!

10 total reviews 
Comment from Julie Helms
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What a beautiful and unique flower. I've never seen one in a garden before. They remind me of the Jack in the Pulpits I have. But the colors of these slippers is just magical. If they can grow in Minnesota, then PA should be possible. I will be investigating! Your poem is lovely and clever with the reference to fairies. A great entry for the 575 flower.
Julie :-)

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
    Thank you for this very nice review, i'm so glad you like it. ❤️
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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What a wonderful poem. Lady slippers are delicate flowers. The image does look like a shoe, so unique. When you walk in the woods, they are growing wild.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
    Thanks so much, for this great review. :)
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a lovely fun contest and it just happens to get my vote in the voting booth. I wish. Wish you the very best as it continues to be voted on. God bless and happy Easter. Patricia .

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
    Thank you for this terrific review and for youe vote...both are appreciated. :)
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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This is absolutely delightful! I love the imagination invested here into these lilies (I think). One could never look at them in the same way again! Some great alliteration too. Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2024
    Thank you, l appreciate this nice review. :)
Comment from Sallyo
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5-7-5 with rhyme! What fun! I like the way you included the name of the flower and pushed the association in the body of the piece. It's not easy to make these short forms stand out, but this one works. All hail to prancing fairies!

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2024
    That's what l always say! Thanks for this fun review. :)
Comment from zanya
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Ah-h isn't that just beautiful- such an appropriate name and connection established between this lovely flower and and that other world of the fairies and a super pic

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2024
    Thanks so much. :)
Comment from RodG
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Your shortie gives us such a vivid picture of these flowers, as if they exist in a magical land where fairies use them as "fancy footwear" and dance. Your rhyme and alliteration are subtle. And that photo is magnificent. Rod

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2024
    Thank you, l appreciate this great review. :)
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 A Flower Writing Prompt. This is lovely and very creative. Having fairies wear them as footwear is delightful. The rhyme of dance and prance is an added bonus. Very nicely written. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2024
    Thank you, your review means a lot to me. :)
Comment from hullabaloo22
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Oh, this is beautiful writing! I can almost picture those fairies dancing among the petals. The picture you chose is perfect too.
Wonderful entry, good luck!

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2024
    Wow! Thank you for this wonderful 6 star review. I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from jessizero
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The image of fairies frolicking in lady slippers is a fun one, and your poem was lovely. You got the syllable count right, and that bit of rhyme really popped! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2024
    Thank you! I'm so glad you like it. :)