Rose Of San Antone
I sing for you!3 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is great, Jim! You have humour and nostalgia wrapped up beautifully in your well-presented 5-7-5 verse. A pleasure to read, as ever! Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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This is great, Jim! You have humour and nostalgia wrapped up beautifully in your well-presented 5-7-5 verse. A pleasure to read, as ever! Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 26-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Thank you. It was just a few simple words for a contest. I'm trying to balance positive with more dramatic stuff. Tomorrow, I will be positive a short, humorous tale.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This put a big smile on my face. Your poem is fun and very funny. I love how you share a story with so few syllables! Very creative and well written and thank you for the laugh!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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This put a big smile on my face. Your poem is fun and very funny. I love how you share a story with so few syllables! Very creative and well written and thank you for the laugh!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Thank you. It was just a few simple words for a contest. I'm trying to balance positive with more dramatic stuff. Tomorrow, I will be positive a short, humorous tale.
Comment from jessizero
This was a very creative take on the "5-7-5 flower" prompt! I like the last line especially. It made me grin. You also got the syllable count right. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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This was a very creative take on the "5-7-5 flower" prompt! I like the last line especially. It made me grin. You also got the syllable count right. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thank you for such great words!
