Willing Hearts
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Comment from lancellot
I didn't see any errors that stuck out to me. The story seems to be moving along your standard formula pretty well. You have a good dog, and the relationship between Sami and Noah is where we expect it to be at this point.
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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I didn't see any errors that stuck out to me. The story seems to be moving along your standard formula pretty well. You have a good dog, and the relationship between Sami and Noah is where we expect it to be at this point.
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I'm not sure if you noticed, but the story about Katherine and Gabriel was published about a week ago. It's doing well.
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That's wonderful. Congratulations.
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The next one about Cordero and Alexandra should be out in about two months. The one I just finished Emma and Seth is with my publisher's editor, no clue about it's estimated time of publishing.
Comment from BethShelby
I don't blame Sami for wanting her own way to get out of the house without having someone with her all the time but I can also understand why that might be a problem. This is a really good story, but I miss Emma and Seth.
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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I don't blame Sami for wanting her own way to get out of the house without having someone with her all the time but I can also understand why that might be a problem. This is a really good story, but I miss Emma and Seth.
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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I miss Emma and Seth, too. They are on their way to my publisher for editing. Thank you for the kind review. I do hope you become attached to Noah and Sami. Sami is a character.
Comment from judiverse
It sounds like keeping a person in protective custody is quite complicated. The way you presented all the details was quite interesting and seems realistic. I liked the way the housekeeping details and the matter of walking Jasper were worked out. Sami has gotten herself into a lot of trouble, and those who are now looking after her safety might have other things they could be doing. At least she is softening her attitude and becoming more willing to cooperate. Great characterization. I love the way you bring the dogs into your stories. They're all unique characters, too. judi
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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It sounds like keeping a person in protective custody is quite complicated. The way you presented all the details was quite interesting and seems realistic. I liked the way the housekeeping details and the matter of walking Jasper were worked out. Sami has gotten herself into a lot of trouble, and those who are now looking after her safety might have other things they could be doing. At least she is softening her attitude and becoming more willing to cooperate. Great characterization. I love the way you bring the dogs into your stories. They're all unique characters, too. judi
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the kind and encouraging review.
Comment from Begin Again
Love the story, Barbara and the friction that seems to exist between Noah and Same. They both seem to be coming to terms with it,,,though slowly. Glad to see all the team were unanimous about keeping Sami safe. Great job!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Love the story, Barbara and the friction that seems to exist between Noah and Same. They both seem to be coming to terms with it,,,though slowly. Glad to see all the team were unanimous about keeping Sami safe. Great job!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the kind and encouraging review.
