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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
When reading your poem, I thought about the nerves of the body and how they can cause a person to do things that are not normal. Going berserk is one of the characteristics.
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When reading your poem, I thought about the nerves of the body and how they can cause a person to do things that are not normal. Going berserk is one of the characteristics.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think my insides have gone berserk as my intestines made so much noise that it is embarrassing! Perhaps it is the probiotics, but your poem resonated with me and this is fine entry for the contest, love Dolly x
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I think my insides have gone berserk as my intestines made so much noise that it is embarrassing! Perhaps it is the probiotics, but your poem resonated with me and this is fine entry for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
Comment from Bryce 1
I think everything is in good shape. I exercise. I was told that even if you smoke cigs all your life, you are so much better off if you exercise with that. I don't smoke cigs and I exercise, so I think my insides have a while fore they go berserk. I hope!
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I think everything is in good shape. I exercise. I was told that even if you smoke cigs all your life, you are so much better off if you exercise with that. I don't smoke cigs and I exercise, so I think my insides have a while fore they go berserk. I hope!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought your poem encourages us to pay attention to our body and stay health. But it's also very playful with that "berserk" comment. haha. This was very creative and you say a lot with so few words.
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I thought your poem encourages us to pay attention to our body and stay health. But it's also very playful with that "berserk" comment. haha. This was very creative and you say a lot with so few words.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 2-4-6-8 writing prompt. The syllable count meets the criteria. I'm not sure if the question was rhetorical but my answer is, they've gone beserk! Good job. Good luck with the contest.
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An excellent entry for the 2-4-6-8 writing prompt. The syllable count meets the criteria. I'm not sure if the question was rhetorical but my answer is, they've gone beserk! Good job. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
Comment from kahpot
Excellent advice, our bodies can tell us when to slow down and seek help, a wonderful short poem with a great message, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Excellent advice, our bodies can tell us when to slow down and seek help, a wonderful short poem with a great message, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed your entry to the 2-4-6-8 poem contest. You got the syllable count correct, and your poem itself was entertaining. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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I enjoyed your entry to the 2-4-6-8 poem contest. You got the syllable count correct, and your poem itself was entertaining. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024