2024 Gypsy's Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 69 "Wings of Warm Wind"x
5 total reviews
Comment from shelley kaye
I glide onto the party -- i think this should be INTO the party...
nicely worded path through the garden
(though my sinuses would not be happy on the physical path lol)
a great haiku with great imagery and smooth flow
the rhyme of wings and spring flowed well on the warm wind...
i like the green font to match the grass...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
  |
I glide onto the party -- i think this should be INTO the party...
nicely worded path through the garden
(though my sinuses would not be happy on the physical path lol)
a great haiku with great imagery and smooth flow
the rhyme of wings and spring flowed well on the warm wind...
i like the green font to match the grass...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
-
Thank you very much, Shelley. I fixed it. I have a hard time with prepositions ... I don't know why lol
gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I love the idea of 'wings of warm air' and 'gliding to a party'. Of course, this party is in a beautiful flower garden. How perfect. Thank you for sharing this gorgeous poem and presentation with us.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
|
I love the idea of 'wings of warm air' and 'gliding to a party'. Of course, this party is in a beautiful flower garden. How perfect. Thank you for sharing this gorgeous poem and presentation with us.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
-
Thank you very much, Barbara.
gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
Beautiful imagery presented in this haiku. I loved the line on wings of warm wind. It brought late spring early summer vibes to the poem. I could think that the party was an outdoor wedding, a summer party. I saw pinks and purples, warm pale yellows. Beautifully written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
|
Beautiful imagery presented in this haiku. I loved the line on wings of warm wind. It brought late spring early summer vibes to the poem. I could think that the party was an outdoor wedding, a summer party. I saw pinks and purples, warm pale yellows. Beautifully written. Gretchen
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
-
Thank you very much, Gretchen.
gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
The wind will certainly carry seed on them, and of course those new seeds become the new growth in the coming spring, this is beautifully written Gypsy,, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
|
The wind will certainly carry seed on them, and of course those new seeds become the new growth in the coming spring, this is beautifully written Gypsy,, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
-
Thank you very much, Roy.
gypsy hugs
-
Most welcome
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Wow, that is so beautiful and just when we here are thinking on these lovely lines, we are getting hit with our first snow of the season in MN. We are getting three feet here. Not inches, feet! After all winter we had nothing and now it is hitting us really hard. We are getting it all at once, I guess.
Your poem and presentation are gorgeous as usual. And it really did make me yearn for it, but I guess we know it can't last forever..
Thanks for this lovely Haiku. And Pinterest is where I get all of my pictures too, unless I use my granddaughters art. Thanks again for sharing. Love, Debi
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
|
Wow, that is so beautiful and just when we here are thinking on these lovely lines, we are getting hit with our first snow of the season in MN. We are getting three feet here. Not inches, feet! After all winter we had nothing and now it is hitting us really hard. We are getting it all at once, I guess.
Your poem and presentation are gorgeous as usual. And it really did make me yearn for it, but I guess we know it can't last forever..
Thanks for this lovely Haiku. And Pinterest is where I get all of my pictures too, unless I use my granddaughters art. Thanks again for sharing. Love, Debi
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
-
Thank you very much, Debi.
love,
marival