A second graders First Confessio
fiction about a second graders sins.6 total reviews
Comment from RJ Fuller
I can't believe I'm out of 6 stars!! This had me cracking up!!! :) Oh, the things that children say! I feel like that poor priest needed to take a swig from the communion bottle after that lol. Good luck in the contest, this is surely a winner!!! :)
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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I can't believe I'm out of 6 stars!! This had me cracking up!!! :) Oh, the things that children say! I feel like that poor priest needed to take a swig from the communion bottle after that lol. Good luck in the contest, this is surely a winner!!! :)
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars you were able to give. Have a blessed day.
Comment from Ric Myworld
"Bless me father, for I have sinned. I wanted a new bicycle. So, my mother told me to keep pray for one. Two years later, I stole Schwinn 10-speed. Now I have the bike, and I can ask for forgiveness." Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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"Bless me father, for I have sinned. I wanted a new bicycle. So, my mother told me to keep pray for one. Two years later, I stole Schwinn 10-speed. Now I have the bike, and I can ask for forgiveness." Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars. Have a blessed day.
LOL I did not cover making restitution.
Comment from jessizero
I am not Catholic, so I'm not 100% sure how this works, but I have an idea. Your story was entertaining and enlightening. I like that you wrote about the teacher for the closing of the story. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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I am not Catholic, so I'm not 100% sure how this works, but I have an idea. Your story was entertaining and enlightening. I like that you wrote about the teacher for the closing of the story. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars. Have a blessed day.
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is really clever. Confessions by second graders is humorous. What have they done that they feel are sins? However, this is good training, learning from an early age to be responsible for your actions. I enjoyed the final confession from the teacher. The Priest knew to expect her the next week. Great dialogue. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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This is really clever. Confessions by second graders is humorous. What have they done that they feel are sins? However, this is good training, learning from an early age to be responsible for your actions. I enjoyed the final confession from the teacher. The Priest knew to expect her the next week. Great dialogue. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars. Have a bllessed day.
Comment from lyenochka
That's a cute way of telling a story by giving us a series of confessions by little kids and then ending with the confession of their teacher. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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That's a cute way of telling a story by giving us a series of confessions by little kids and then ending with the confession of their teacher. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars. Have a blessed.
As you can see I did not write a novel in a month. What I learned was I learned. could write a thousand words a day.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading. I have only taught second grade for one year, the rest of my 25 years what in first grade. LOL I swear there's a special place in God's heart for early elementary teachers. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading. I have only taught second grade for one year, the rest of my 25 years what in first grade. LOL I swear there's a special place in God's heart for early elementary teachers. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars. Have a blessed day.
