Sandra's Lover
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Training Goes Wrong"A macabre crime thriller. Grotesque and detailed.
2 total reviews
Comment from JanPerry
This is so graphic that it needs the 18 years warning page. I didn't get it. I'm not into sexually graphic content myself.
It's okay for a porn story if you're into that sort of thing. Lust is over rated.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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This is so graphic that it needs the 18 years warning page. I didn't get it. I'm not into sexually graphic content myself.
It's okay for a porn story if you're into that sort of thing. Lust is over rated.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Jan,
Thank you for your review. This is part of a book and on its own its definitely pornographic. However, its important to the entire story and leads to what makes a person break down mentally. I would encourage you, if you like crime stories, to read the entire book. It may help you. However, in any case I value feedback.
Eileen
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Okay thank
Comment from Heidixoxo
Wow....what an incredible story you have written. This definitely had my attention the entire time. Yoh wrote this raunchy but still yet classy, not easy to do. The end?? That got me though. I was not expecting that so great job!! Best of luck. I hope to see more of your work in the near future.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Wow....what an incredible story you have written. This definitely had my attention the entire time. Yoh wrote this raunchy but still yet classy, not easy to do. The end?? That got me though. I was not expecting that so great job!! Best of luck. I hope to see more of your work in the near future.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for your feedback. I hope you have read the entire book. I will be posting more chapters soon.