Forever Life
A six word poem14 total reviews
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
The words you write are so true. This short six word poem, says a lot with few words. I wish you good luck in the contest with this! The picture also gives a great visual.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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The words you write are so true. This short six word poem, says a lot with few words. I wish you good luck in the contest with this! The picture also gives a great visual.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I cannot disagree with your thought, though other endings come to mind, such as "Judgement day arrives," though that may not happen until He returns, or "Are you prepared?" Thought provoking.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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I cannot disagree with your thought, though other endings come to mind, such as "Judgement day arrives," though that may not happen until He returns, or "Are you prepared?" Thought provoking.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Tom, it was a bit tricky trying to say how I feel in so few words, but I enjoyed trying, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 6 Word Poetry contest. This is a very deep poem for 6 a.m. before coffee. :-) My reaction is that I agree, there has to be more than this right here and I'm hopeful that our immortal reality is a big improvement. Nice writing. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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An excellent entry for the 6 Word Poetry contest. This is a very deep poem for 6 a.m. before coffee. :-) My reaction is that I agree, there has to be more than this right here and I'm hopeful that our immortal reality is a big improvement. Nice writing. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 26-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, and yes, I think it definitely needs to be an improvement, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from royowen
There I something about being in Christ that is so self assuring about that relationship, the blessed assurance that one day we will be with the one who loves us beyond measure, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2024
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There I something about being in Christ that is so self assuring about that relationship, the blessed assurance that one day we will be with the one who loves us beyond measure, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 26-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your very understanding comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Most welcome
