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Forever Life

A six word poem

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Comment from AP Apgar
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What an excellent poem and picture presentation supporting- poem is well written and thought provoking- when life ends reality begins- life is but a dream - well done - AP

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
    Thank you, AP, I enjoyed trying this short form again, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Bill Schott
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This six-word poem, Forever Life, has the proper formatting and bends the notion that we move from life to death to allow that we move from restriction to real life.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
    Thank you, Bill, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from jessizero
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This "just a thought" was definitely worth pondering. I am impressed that you expressed such a deep thought in only six words. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
    Thank you for your very understanding comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gloria ....
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Very nicely written six word poem, and not an easy thing to do.

This is a most fitting entry for the Holy Week, and I wish you all the best with the Contest Committee. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much, Gloria, I enjoyed trying this form again, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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Very concise and complete in its effectiveness here with six words.
Thank you sharing this short, short poem in six words. Life is so much more than what we can see, to paraphrase Esther in the movie "Ben Hur."
Good luck in that contest!

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much, and what a wonderful movie that is/was, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Wendy G
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Thank you for this very thoughtful - and thought-provoking- poem in just six apt words. Yes, I believe that this life is just a shadow of what is to come, and then we experience the full reality. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
    Thank you, Wendy, yes, I also believe this life is a steppingstone, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hi Kahpot, you have penned six powerful words. This is a poem of truth, and thought-provoking too. Well-chosen photo. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Margaret

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
    Thank you, Margaret, for your wonderful and encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Losing someone close and realising the finality of it, leaves us with a stark reality and your words are painful reminders of grief and sorrow when someone dies, a poignant post for the contest, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
    Thank you, Dolly, for your wonderful response, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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I like your Jisei haiku, 6 words entry for the contest. I like the presentation too.

Well done

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much Gypsy, I enjoyed having another try at this form, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Mark D. R.
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The artwork and poem (words) are paired nicely for this contest.

You achieved the trick of creating a poem with just a few words into a most meaningful comment about our being.

Thanks!

Mark

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
    Thank you, Mark, hopefully I am getting the idea, as always very much appreciated****kahpot