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Comment from Douglas Goff
"Passion poems from you straight to my heart"
What an elegant line full of hope and romance.
This one needed review number fifteen, so here it is!
Douglas
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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"Passion poems from you straight to my heart"
What an elegant line full of hope and romance.
This one needed review number fifteen, so here it is!
Douglas
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Have you been talking to karenina? She does the same thing...she goes looking for 14 review poems. Regardless you are both fanstory angels 😇
Gypsy hugs and kisses
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I started doing this when I was new to learn about the other members and see what styles they had. Bumping pieces seemed like a nice thing to do. I got Karenina a long time ago.
Comment from jim vecchio
I was beginning to feel deprived, not having read one of your works for awhile. As usual, so beautiful with an image to match your wondrous words. Your writings always reach my heart.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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I was beginning to feel deprived, not having read one of your works for awhile. As usual, so beautiful with an image to match your wondrous words. Your writings always reach my heart.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
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Thank you. Same to you. Always a pleasure to see one of your posts.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Really writing a lot of romance lately. I hope that means good news. You write lovely things. You always have such beautiful pictures too. Enjoy the weekend coming up. Karen
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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Really writing a lot of romance lately. I hope that means good news. You write lovely things. You always have such beautiful pictures too. Enjoy the weekend coming up. Karen
Comment Written 21-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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thank you very much, Karen
gypsy
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
always great writing the words are meaningful
colorful and the images are beyond imagination
I have always liked your writing, so your poems are great to review.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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always great writing the words are meaningful
colorful and the images are beyond imagination
I have always liked your writing, so your poems are great to review.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from teafor2
Gypsy, a unique and creative subtle (almost) sensuous write...This intertwining of colors draws attention to and dramatizes the amorous (wooing) by protagonist...Selected picture is very complimentary to the
verbiage, adding a memorable quality to scribe's presentation. Good luck
in the contest. teafor2
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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Gypsy, a unique and creative subtle (almost) sensuous write...This intertwining of colors draws attention to and dramatizes the amorous (wooing) by protagonist...Selected picture is very complimentary to the
verbiage, adding a memorable quality to scribe's presentation. Good luck
in the contest. teafor2
Comment Written 20-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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Teafor2
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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You are welcome. teafor2
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Your presentation for this contest entry is absolutely gorgeous. Thank you for sharing this entry with us. I enjoyed reading. I could feel the emotion of this romantic poem. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Your presentation for this contest entry is absolutely gorgeous. Thank you for sharing this entry with us. I enjoyed reading. I could feel the emotion of this romantic poem. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much , Barbara. As always your reviews are kind and insightful.
Love,
Marival aka Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
...in a galaxy far far away...
i liked this free verse love poem
very cool imagery of stars of love seizing your hand...
smooth flow from line to line... and a feeling of hopefulness...
cool pics, too.
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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...in a galaxy far far away...
i liked this free verse love poem
very cool imagery of stars of love seizing your hand...
smooth flow from line to line... and a feeling of hopefulness...
cool pics, too.
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 20-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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I didn't think about "stars war" lol
Thank you very much for the excellent review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Baltimore Born
This is a well-crafted free verse poem. Your message in this poem is clear. Good personification and creativity throughout the poem. Very good complimentary picture. Nice job.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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This is a well-crafted free verse poem. Your message in this poem is clear. Good personification and creativity throughout the poem. Very good complimentary picture. Nice job.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for the excellent review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
This is a fine poem Gypsy, I particularly liked the night tinted wind sings amidst a yearning storm, this is a beauty my friend, it was a pleasure and a privilege reading it, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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This is a fine poem Gypsy, I particularly liked the night tinted wind sings amidst a yearning storm, this is a beauty my friend, it was a pleasure and a privilege reading it, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for the excellent review.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome
Comment from kahpot
I love, love, especially forever love, even the heartbreak it can bring, along with the most satisfying times and memories it brings, an excellent read, so very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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I love, love, especially forever love, even the heartbreak it can bring, along with the most satisfying times and memories it brings, an excellent read, so very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy