Life Is
2-4-2 poem for the contest10 total reviews
Comment from Debbie Pope
I think you have a winner here, June. Some people don't award six star ratings to the short posts, but this is a good one. It's hard to make an impression in such a limited number of words. I like your use of the active verb "go" in the last line. That last line just has pizzaz. I think that's why I like your post.
Good luck in the contest. Hope the other judges feel as I do.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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I think you have a winner here, June. Some people don't award six star ratings to the short posts, but this is a good one. It's hard to make an impression in such a limited number of words. I like your use of the active verb "go" in the last line. That last line just has pizzaz. I think that's why I like your post.
Good luck in the contest. Hope the other judges feel as I do.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for the generous stars!
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi June, this is a great contest entry, and your words have good sensory appeal. I especially like:
Go Bold
(Go Bold or go home)
I love the photo. Well done. A pleasure to read. Xo. Margaret
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Hi June, this is a great contest entry, and your words have good sensory appeal. I especially like:
Go Bold
(Go Bold or go home)
I love the photo. Well done. A pleasure to read. Xo. Margaret
Comment Written 20-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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I?m glad you enjoyed this short one highlighting the importance of living bold and true to yourself. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-4-2, Life Is, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that the world we step into needs to be made more comfortable for us, or the stay will be less than it could be.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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This 2-4-2, Life Is, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that the world we step into needs to be made more comfortable for us, or the stay will be less than it could be.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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We get out of life what we out into it. I?m glad you enjoyed this short one on living bold and true to yourself. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated.
Comment from kahpot
Very well said, a wonderful and uplifting message, your words are telling us all to live our lives to the fullest, an excellent 2-4-2 poem, very well presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Very well said, a wonderful and uplifting message, your words are telling us all to live our lives to the fullest, an excellent 2-4-2 poem, very well presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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We get out of life what we out into it. I?m glad you enjoyed this short one on living bold and true to yourself. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This is an excellent entry for the 2-4-2 Poetry contest. In all seriousness, I would buy a Tshirt with this poem and this painting on it. I like it very much. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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This is an excellent entry for the 2-4-2 Poetry contest. In all seriousness, I would buy a Tshirt with this poem and this painting on it. I like it very much. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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We get out of life what we out into it. I?m glad you enjoyed this short one on living bold and true to yourself. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated.
Comment from jessizero
I really liked your 2-4-2 poem. Your syllable count was correct, and the message was awesome. I liked the last line. Go bold! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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I really liked your 2-4-2 poem. Your syllable count was correct, and the message was awesome. I liked the last line. Go bold! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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We get out of life what we out into it. I?m glad you enjoyed this short one on living bold and true to yourself. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated.
Comment from Mark D. R.
June,
Great motto for the way we should look at life!
I am always amazed how effective these 2-4-2 poems can be. Sincerely wish that FS would have these contests monthly.
Mark
P.S. IMHO you can drop the period. The squiggle works fine.
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June,
Great motto for the way we should look at life!
I am always amazed how effective these 2-4-2 poems can be. Sincerely wish that FS would have these contests monthly.
Mark
P.S. IMHO you can drop the period. The squiggle works fine.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
Comment from Mrs. KT
Oh, June!
How I love the sentiments expressed in your exceptionally well-crafted 2/4/2 poem.
I especially love the line, "Go Bold!"
Message received!
Best Wishes!
Fondly,
diane
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Oh, June!
How I love the sentiments expressed in your exceptionally well-crafted 2/4/2 poem.
I especially love the line, "Go Bold!"
Message received!
Best Wishes!
Fondly,
diane
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Yes. We get out of life what we put into it. Might as well go feisty and bold! Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated.
Comment from royowen
I think if we know what we believe, and I'm not talking about opinion, I'm talking about what is true wisdom, and be bold in how you approach it, well done,, good job, blessings Roy
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I think if we know what we believe, and I'm not talking about opinion, I'm talking about what is true wisdom, and be bold in how you approach it, well done,, good job, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
Comment from Ginda Simpson
This is a winning poem/sentiment in my book as both painter and writer. You have used a very appropriate metaphor to get this idea across, making this an excellent entry for the contest.
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This is a winning poem/sentiment in my book as both painter and writer. You have used a very appropriate metaphor to get this idea across, making this an excellent entry for the contest.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024