Daffodils
Sedoka2 total reviews
Comment from Julie Helms
Daffodils just rule early spring. Hands down! You've written a lovely tribute to them and their role as markers between the daylight and gloomy darkness.
I wish the first line didn't conclude on the second line.
Beneath gray skies in
March
Beneath gray March skies
The wintry gusts still rattle
Poetically it may not matter, just my OCD requiring it. :-)
Thanks for sharing! Julie
reply by the author on 16-May-2024
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Daffodils just rule early spring. Hands down! You've written a lovely tribute to them and their role as markers between the daylight and gloomy darkness.
I wish the first line didn't conclude on the second line.
Beneath gray skies in
March
Beneath gray March skies
The wintry gusts still rattle
Poetically it may not matter, just my OCD requiring it. :-)
Thanks for sharing! Julie
Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 16-May-2024
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Thanks for reading and sharing zanya
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem beautifully captures the transition from winter to spring, painting a strong picture of the changing seasons. I loved your use of colors. Excellent descriptions. This was a wonderfully crafted poem. Loved it!
reply by the author on 16-May-2024
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Your poem beautifully captures the transition from winter to spring, painting a strong picture of the changing seasons. I loved your use of colors. Excellent descriptions. This was a wonderfully crafted poem. Loved it!
Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 16-May-2024
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Great review zanya