Under a Starry Sky
Lovers on a walk, with hopes for the future.2 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
You did a great job with this poem. Your syllable count was correct and I loved the repetition of "forever." The two sides of the story were wonderful. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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You did a great job with this poem. Your syllable count was correct and I loved the repetition of "forever." The two sides of the story were wonderful. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the read and the review. Appreciated.
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
This poem is a great Sedoka! It has all the elements. It has perfect syllable counts, and the same subject with different perspectives. I also love the picture too!
Great job with this!
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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This poem is a great Sedoka! It has all the elements. It has perfect syllable counts, and the same subject with different perspectives. I also love the picture too!
Great job with this!
Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thanks so much for taking the time to read and provide encouraging feeback.