Comment from
jessizero
Congratulations on your first milestone post! You got the syllable count right, and the poem is something to which many people can relate. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
Comment from
Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 poetry contest and a good first post. Welcome to Fanstormeaning behind it. Very good use of a minimum amount of words to send a big message. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
Thank you for your feedback! :)
reply by Marilyn Hamilton on 18-Mar-2024
Dang, I really had some kind of typing glitch on that review. So sorry. LOL What I was attempting to type was welcome to Fanstory.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
Haha! No worries! Thank you!