Unfriendly Neighbors
A short fable8 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
A lovely story with a fine ending. Working together is always the answer and it promotes, friendship, trust and security. I enjoyed this story and the moral at the end. Well done, and best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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A lovely story with a fine ending. Working together is always the answer and it promotes, friendship, trust and security. I enjoyed this story and the moral at the end. Well done, and best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Wendy, for your praise of my fable. So pleased you like its moral. Rod
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Pets can do justice when it comes to saving a life. Your poem does have a moral behind it and I like the idea of pets helping another pet in this telltale story.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Pets can do justice when it comes to saving a life. Your poem does have a moral behind it and I like the idea of pets helping another pet in this telltale story.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Rosemary, for sharing my story.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Good use of alliteration the hard c's & K's create a snarling mood. This has a very good lesson to it as this is written for children and children are in the space to learn lessons and I think they especially learn them from animals. That has always been the goal in my Be Wee with Bea series that children and adults may learn lessons.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Good use of alliteration the hard c's & K's create a snarling mood. This has a very good lesson to it as this is written for children and children are in the space to learn lessons and I think they especially learn them from animals. That has always been the goal in my Be Wee with Bea series that children and adults may learn lessons.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Ii do hope children read this fable. I truly appreciate your sharing and praising it, Liz.
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I was a teacher, so I know this would be excellent for that age level. Maybe submit it to a children's magazine. I just looked them up. There are several.
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Thank you for the suggestion.
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Keep me in the loop
Comment from LJbutterfly
I enjoyed this creative and suspenseful fable. Your three characters were believable and described well. Your story flowed smoothly and had a very satisfying ending. The moral fit the story perfectly. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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I enjoyed this creative and suspenseful fable. Your three characters were believable and described well. Your story flowed smoothly and had a very satisfying ending. The moral fit the story perfectly. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much, LJbutterfly. I am delighted you found my characters believable and the ending satisfying.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
this is a very charming entry for the Write a Modern Fable writing prompt. cute story, clear dialogue and a good moral. The artwork was perfect. Thanks for sharing and good luck.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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this is a very charming entry for the Write a Modern Fable writing prompt. cute story, clear dialogue and a good moral. The artwork was perfect. Thanks for sharing and good luck.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Marilyn. I appreciate the kudos.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I loved the moral of this story and we find out who are friends are when we are in need and I have learned this lesson over and over in life, a fine post, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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I loved the moral of this story and we find out who are friends are when we are in need and I have learned this lesson over and over in life, a fine post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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This story was fun to write with a furry cast. I, too, have learned this lesson over and over. Thanks for sharing, Dolly.
Comment from royowen
These three animals are diverse to say the least, but when a need is uncovered and there's good people, but in this case three good natured furry people, and what a wonderful proverb, a friend in need, is a friend indeed, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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These three animals are diverse to say the least, but when a need is uncovered and there's good people, but in this case three good natured furry people, and what a wonderful proverb, a friend in need, is a friend indeed, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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My furry friends and I thank you, Roy, for sharing and praising our story.
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Most welcome
Comment from M_Esther
This is a very nice story. Well-written and I love the names you chose for the pets and the overall story line. I'm glad the squirrel and cat decided to help Caruso in the end.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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This is a very nice story. Well-written and I love the names you chose for the pets and the overall story line. I'm glad the squirrel and cat decided to help Caruso in the end.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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I am delighted you enjoyed my fable, MEsther. Many thanks for your review.