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Wink wink

5-7-5 poetry

2 total reviews 
Comment from Christina Kinney
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

The poem adheres to the specific format and structure for 5-7-5 poetry.

It leaves space to creatively imagine your own fantasy scenario whilst giving a clear picture of the message portrayed - excitement and uncertainty.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
    Thank you dear friend <3
Comment from RodG
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

You make us imagine how many pick-up lines this woman must have heard from men. This gambit is hardly original, and I can see why she would shut him down and leave. Rod

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
    Thank you dear friend <3