To ponder is to dream
Haiku (sturdy oak supports)4 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
Some food for thought here. Pondering as clouds form images. Messages from above? I liked the message and the artwork. Great entry for the contest, Mark.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
Some food for thought here. Pondering as clouds form images. Messages from above? I liked the message and the artwork. Great entry for the contest, Mark.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Thanks June for your support. Often clouds have Rorschach meanings (-;
Mark
Comment from tempeste
Ciao!
I don't have an oak tree but I do love to lay down in the shade and watch the clouds drift by.
Let my thoughts wonder and often I dose off listening to the leaves rustling in the breeze.
I'm a simple lass and I'm happy just basking in Mother Nature gentle embrace.
I love the pic , the hues and the carefree vibe you created.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
Ciao!
I don't have an oak tree but I do love to lay down in the shade and watch the clouds drift by.
Let my thoughts wonder and often I dose off listening to the leaves rustling in the breeze.
I'm a simple lass and I'm happy just basking in Mother Nature gentle embrace.
I love the pic , the hues and the carefree vibe you created.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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Thanks for your review. Honestly, it was Karenina?s recent post, mentioned in my author?s note, that was my inspiration for my short poem. She encouraged me to post it.
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Thanks for your review. Honestly, it was Karenina?s recent post, mentioned in my author?s note, that was my inspiration for my short poem. She encouraged me to post it.
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Ciao , you now have 4 votes!
Best of luck ! 🍀
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I often take a picnic in the park and sit under an oak tree in the summer and read my book, your poem reminded me of last summer in England here, a fine post, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
I often take a picnic in the park and sit under an oak tree in the summer and read my book, your poem reminded me of last summer in England here, a fine post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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Pervhance chance to dream about those wondrous summer days with a book in your lap - worth remembering for sure.
Thanks Dolly for your review. Do check out my author notes to see what inspired my poem post.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I thought I'd reviewed this one but understand now. I love it. So peaceful and dreamy. We have, on the one hand, nature's physical strength and, on the other, the transient nature of those clouds, fueling the imagination. A perfect combination, ideal for this format! Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
I thought I'd reviewed this one but understand now. I love it. So peaceful and dreamy. We have, on the one hand, nature's physical strength and, on the other, the transient nature of those clouds, fueling the imagination. A perfect combination, ideal for this format! Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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Debbie,
Thanks for your review. Do check out my author notes to see what inspired my contest entry.
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Yes, I reviewed Karenina's. I remember now.