Comment from Saki the Artist

Excellent

Super awesome. I love rhyming abecdarian poems. Yours flowed nicely and no part felt forced (although the X-ray was a stretch haha).

The rhyming pattern kind of got a little loose at the end, but I won't fault it since that wasn't part of the contest prompt.

Overall a great poem. Five stars.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024

Thank you for your review. I appreciate your comments.

Comment from faye wright

Exceptional

Beautifully written. It sums up nicely how we should be living our lives. This is done not only in accordance with the structure of the poem but it rhymes as well.
Best wishes for a win in the contest

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024

Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging review. I especially appreciate the sixth star.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This was a great Abecdarian poem. I liked your rhymes, and the words flowed beautifully. It was like a lovely poem, not just a collection of words like some of these poems are. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024

Thank you for reviewing it. I appreciate your encouraging words and best wishes.

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

This entry for the Abecdarian writing prompt meets the criteria. It has a good flow and clear rhymes. The message is clear which isn't easy when forced to follow this format. Good luck.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024

Thank you. You're right; it was quite a challenge. I appreciate your kind words and good luck wish.