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Justice Is Coming

weapons of mass indigestion

2 total reviews 
Comment from jessizero
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I only tried plantains once, but it was more than enough. I laughed at this 5-7-5 poem, as I have laughed in the past about the evil of plantains. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
    Thanks a bunch Jessi! Justice to plantains!
Comment from rspoet
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
with very good art work and some interesting rhymes.
Plantains are eaten in many places,
probably better for you than red meat.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
    Yes so long as they are cooked or boiled first, so everyone can hear their screams. After a baptism of fire they are sanctified and acceptable. Raw plantains must die! Thanks Robert ; )