A Wet Performance
Sue loved to dance in the soft rain.2 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, A Wet Performance, has the proper formatting and finds little Sue out in the rain. One might think that the dancing and the precipitation are related actions.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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This 5-7-5, A Wet Performance, has the proper formatting and finds little Sue out in the rain. One might think that the dancing and the precipitation are related actions.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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I think you are correct about the two being related actions. Thanks for the read and feedback.
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
This is a cute, sweet poem about a girl who lived to dance in the rain. I love the picture you chose to go with it!
I think this is a perfect 5-7-5 poem, and I wish you the best in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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This is a cute, sweet poem about a girl who lived to dance in the rain. I love the picture you chose to go with it!
I think this is a perfect 5-7-5 poem, and I wish you the best in the contest!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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Thanks for the read and the encouraging feedback.